EVALUATION
I think that our preliminary went well and better than expected. I think the editing went well considering that the group did not have much experience using iMovie and it was the first time editing a piece of film properly. From the feedback which has been given from other members in the group, the camera work is good and the camera is held steady where appropriate and needed. We planned the camera work and different shots we were going to use before hand so when it came to filming we could do it straight away without and hesitation or wasting time. Continuity editing was used well because we planned what we were going to do before. It gave the correct effect which it was supposed to and looked correct and not unusual. We stuck to the 180 degree rule which means we have stuck to the brief which the exam board have given us. By using this the film looks good to the audience and does not confused them- it helps them to understand what is going on.
Some of the points which we need to improve on for next time is the music and if it is used at the appropriate time. Music still needs to be used as it is a key convention of the thriller but just when needed instead of randomly over certain sections. We could have avoided this music coming across pointless at certain times by paying more attention when editing. Although we used many different camera shots and movements in the preliminary task, we need to improve on transitions and vary the choice of transitions. This is something we can improve on in editing once we gain more experience with iMovie. To do this we could add more in and vary the choice instead of using the same transition throughout. Another improvement is to extended the dialogue between the two characters to make it into more of a conversation and to spend more time with characters so that you know more of the storyline and the audience understands what is going on more. Another key convention which could have been improved is mise-en-scene. This could be done by the use of clothing which the characters wore. As this was an interview type situation the actors could have worn more office wear clothes to make it look more effective and realistic to the audience
From this preliminary task I have learnt many different conventions and rules about filming and editing, considering I have never done media at a lower level. I have learnt the 180 degree rules and how you must stick to it whilst filming otherwise it looks unusual and confuses the audience as to what it happening. I have also learn what continuity editing is, how to film and edit it to make it look effective. I have learnt how to use the camera and film different shots such as an over the shoulder shot, and also how to use editing software such as iMovie which I have never used previously, and now I can use it well.
As a result of the preliminary task and the improvements and successful points which I have discussed previously, we will take forward the improvement to make changes to so that our final task which we film will have no need for improvements and will hopefully have all successful points in the next evaluation.
This shot is filmed well and the camera work is effective, however it is blurry and pixellated. To improve this we could have focused the camera more or used a better quality camera, which is something we may consider next for our final thriller task.
This is a shot that went really well in the preliminary task and is one that we are proud of. It was edited to make it look like a CCTV camera which I think looks effective as you can tell what this shot is supposed to be and supposed to look like. As this shot went so well it is something which we are thinking of recreating in the final task.
This shot was also filmed well and there was not a problem with the camera work, however it lasts too long. To improve this we could have made the two shots shorted whilst filming them or edit them to appear shorter so that the audiences attention is still on the film and they have not lost interest.
This technique is called match on action. I think this is one of the most effective shots in the preliminary task. The two different shots flow from one to the next without it looking out of place, and this has been done by our careful editing. As this shot went so well it's something our group are considering using in the final thriller opening task.